Tuesday, August 4, 2009


Today, I read a comment over at the Literary Lab that mentioned the importance of emotions carrying from one scene to the next. I almost slapped myself in the face. Duh!

It just occurred to me now that in my previous scene my MC was way to happy. I mean, she just had to leave her best friend behind when she moved and doesn't know when she will see him again. That has to have an effect.

Excuse me while I got bang my notebook on my head for my foolishness.

1 comment:

  1. Glad the Lit Lab is helpful for you! Good luck on smoothing out those emotions. :)